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Hidden beach by ChrispyDee

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Pros

This is a very beautiful piece. The shading and angle of the light are perfect, and the color choice is very well done. It makes me think about jurassic times, when the dinosaurs roamed the Earth. The sea serpent is a great example of the prehistoric aura. It also depicts a mood of pure tranquility. I feel like i could just sit on the log and watch the sunset and the moonrise forever. The water is very realistic and the reflections are immaculate.

Cons
I only have two cons, and they are very minor. One is that the sky is portraying two different things. it is saying that the sun is setting, but the sky doesn't reflect that. The sky seems to be saying, no, it is mid day. And the only other thing i would change would be the water's dirty brown color.
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ChrispyDee Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
I thank you for your critique my friend! :)

I'm honestly not sure about the sky. My observations may be wrong, but as long as the sun sits high enough over the horizon, the sky mostly seems blue to me. It starts massively darkening once it passes the line for good. Well I'm sure it's not perfect, but I think it's not that wrong after all :D
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pyrosaki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know, i just thought it wouldn't be a very legit critic if there were no cons, and like i said before (at least i think i did) they were very minor compared to the pros of the entire thing
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ChrispyDee Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Hey every critique has to have 2 faces :) It made me think about the picture, and that's what counts and how we learn.
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pyrosaki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yup! i really bugs me when people just give everyone five stars, and trust me, i'm a harsh and judgmental person when it comes to this stuff, so a 4 1/2 in very good
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ChrispyDee Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Haha, I'm honored for sure ;) Thanks again!
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pyrosaki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No prob, dude!
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